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The Arrival of Oh Pi, originally titled The Story of David, was planned to be the first episode of the first series of Oh Pi, written by Scoobydooman90001. This story would have set up the premise of the series, the main characters, the main setting, the over-arching plot line and anything else that could have been considered important. However, the series was later cancelled due to a number of reasons, leaving the first episode largely unfinished. The fifteen pages of the unfinished first draft that was written were saved and have been uploaded here for you to read below. This story was later adapted for The New Adventures of Oh Pi and can be found on this page.

Story

Pages

Miscellaneous

This is the episode plan that was used when writing the story. The text highlighted in green indicates what has been written and the text highlighted in black indicates what remained to be written.

Appearances

Monsters

Gallery

Differences in the finished version

There are many differences between this story and the adapted version, as listed below:

  • The original version of the story takes place in 2016, while the adapted version takes place in the year 3007.
  • The team are already together at the beginning of the story and are introduced one after the other.
  • The city is named the Virtue Sector and not Ganithrum. As such, the team is named the Virtue Kaiju Unit and not the Ganithrum Kaiju Defense Force.
  • David's family and home is never seen.
  • Oh Pi is discovered in the mountains instead of the woods.
  • Oh Pi arrives on Earth within a green metallic pod.
  • Oh Pi acts more like an animal in the adapted version.
  • Oh Pi does not confirm that his name is Oh Pi in the adapted version.
  • There are no secret tunnels seen underneath the ground.
  • Skarazanni reveals his name through a humming sound instead of through a pulse.
  • The circles on Skarazanni's arms do not flash in the adapted version.
  • Skarazanni arrives in a pod instead of a meteor.
  • Skarazanni is able to resist the military's attempts at attacking it in the adapted version.

Trivia

  • The reference to Mothra was secretly setting up a joke that would have been answered in the second series. During the battle with Authoris, many of the Godzilla monsters would have been unleashed on the Earth. The fictional Mothra was to have been challenged by the 'real' Mothra, proving Katherine was not lying.
  • The title of the story is not a reference to the biblical story, The Story of David. Each main character was to feature in a story focused primarily on them. Each of these stories would be titled 'The Story of...' and would act as character pieces to develop the titular characters.


Scoobydooman90001's Stories
Insolitam
SEASON ONE
My Churchyard Grim • Drag Lake • The Picture Paints a Thousand Tears • Stay Away from the Attic
The Modern Day Dunnie • The Crass Woman • Nine Lives Taken • Defective Product • Already Dead
Her and the Two of Us
The New Adventures of Oh Pi
The Arrival of Oh Pi (Unfinished 2016 Draft)
SEASON ONE
The Arrival of Oh PiMuseum PlanetSeeing Pink Elephants
The Attack of the Very Creative Rabbit MonsterThe Human OhpinianValve Sells Out Again
Oh Pi and the Child Murderer • Oh Pi Meets His Match • The Gun Incident • The Stupid Monster
Silent Invasion • Pluto Still Isn't a Planet • The Death of Oh Pi • Verri Unimpressive • The Censor Bar of Death
Not the Bees! • Nurthed Beyond Belief • Verri Strange • The Crossover • Convenient
Friday the 13th: Jason vs. Kaiju
The Undying BladeAs Mother SaysBack to Basics
The Night of the Sky • All Through the Desert • The Fighting Zone
Shin Minilla: Hero of Japan
Slightly TroubledUnderground BeastsThe Lesser KnownHalf Brother • Seatopia Rising
Japan Descending • What Happened On My Holiday • Centipede Shin
Millennian Colonisation • Planets Collide
Council of Creators
Episode 2Episode 5Episode 9Episode 14Episode 15Episode 16Episode 18Episode 19
Episode 24Episode 27Episode 28Episode 32Episode 33Episode 36Episode 37Episode 38
Episode 42Episode 44Episode 49Happy ChristmasKoopa's Birthday SurpriseEpisode 51
Episode 52
Council of Creators - Side Stories
Meme DownfallSingles In Your Area
Maria in the Multiverse
SEASON ONE
Star-Struck • Maria on the Planet of the Dinosaurs • Social Call • The City of Emptiness
The Best Resort in the Universe • Where Only Happiness Lies • Planet Beyond the Sun
Drifting Through Space • Martin in the Multiverse • Hidden Trades
Other Stories
The Amazing Godzilla ManDahmos - This Is Me